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Old 12-14-2009, 03:46 PM   #26
koland
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Originally Posted by Elfwreck View Post
And the hero injects the heroin, which makes him drift off to sleep, during which he dreams that he activates the 12k year old device...

Um. Sorry. I don't normally mind typos, but that's one that really catches my attention. The female variant of hero is heroine. Drop the e, and you've got a white powder drug not much connected with heroism.
Then again, perhaps not a typo - as the HEROIN caused the HERO to drop off to sleep (leaving the HEROINE to her own devices, I suppose...).
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