Thread: Armistice Walker and the Golden Orb (Nanowrimo)
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Old 11-30-2009, 08:41 PM   #42
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Love the story -- and it's great to see how it changes as it evolves! I like Constance. She'll whip Biggles into shape .... or Else!

In the bit above --- is there a word missing? Or is this an elision and Patrick has his "yoke" stuck? I'm not used to seeing elisions cross a paragraph boundary, but who knows.....
Well, I guess I did forget my head, there...
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