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Originally Posted by pshrynk
"....." screamed Armistice, pulling back with all his strength on the yoke.
Sparks flew out from under the console, where Patrick had his stuck. "Fark! Fark! Fark!" .....
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Love the story -- and it's great to see how it changes as it evolves! I like Constance. She'll whip Biggles into shape .... or Else!
In the bit above --- is there a word missing? Or is this an elision and Patrick has his "yoke" stuck? I'm not used to seeing elisions cross a paragraph boundary, but who knows.....