Thread: Christmas Short Story
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Old 11-29-2009, 12:05 AM   #2
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That was a very short story, but I loved it. My Ted and Jerry were in it! (well, technically, they are your characters, but I fell in love with them in your book, Boomerang).

I could see you fleshing it out into a longer Christmas story.

Nice job
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