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Old 11-12-2009, 12:30 PM   #26
Steven Lake
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"He studied their large, bulging, weevil like appearance..."

That's a great way to do a description. It gets the basics down and leaves the rest to the reader to decide. Or in the case of another character I did, I described him as a cross between a duck and an ostrich dressed in a rainbow of colors, which is all you really needed to know about him since his character and personality did the rest.
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