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Old 11-11-2009, 12:27 PM   #20
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Originally Posted by slm View Post
How about "Half the battery life is in the first third of the meter"
That's good. And it obviously needs simplifying, as you've been much too optimistic in your reading of it. Combining my meaning and (most) of your phrasing, having a nice double use of "two-thirds":


"Two-thirds of the battery life has gone when the indicator shows two-thirds left."
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