[jaxx6166]

I just kind of feel like right now its almost like when the big reveal comes in a few people will be like "Who the eff is that?" And have to reread back to find the name or something again.

I hate that. I dont even know if the big reveal will be all that important or awesome. Then again.. .. .. I need to re-read my summary and see how big a role he plays. I'm pretty sure he just comes on screen again to be all mwahahaha and then turns it over to the other guy, a pissed off sentient bullshark. I'm wondering if I even need an antagonist in this right now. The hero kind of just gets tugged along and runs into the warped nature, which provides plenty of conflict... Maybe.

Looking over the outline, it looks like things have started to get off track. I need to fix this. But it has to be fixed without deleting words. This will be fun.

I may just bend my outline to go along with what is happening to the hero, who is now on track to become a zombie. Maybe the bad guy happens to have an antidote. Which would mean that he'd have to find the antidote to save the Queen a chapter early. Then he'd have to find another one for himself. Blegh.