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jaxx6166 · 11-10-2009, 09:50 PM

Doug, we're going to play on the seesaw today. Real life caught up with me. Probably going to slow me down significantly. My word count stands as is. I hope to get at least 2k by the end of the night though. I'm just now starting and allowing myself 2 hours after fooling around all day. I hit a conundrum last night though.

It seems the antagonist as a character is almost non-existant. He made a brief cameo in Chapter 2 as the leader of a village. The bad guy then essentially knighted him and sent him on a quest with cursed armor.

The cursed armor made him go crazy and attack a bunch of civilians who were linked to the City. So then he got captured by their police force.

And then he was brought before the Queen to hear his fate. While he was talking to the queen, fishmen attacked her. She was stabbed, but recovered. Then the Queen thinks the good guy is a good guy, so they sit for tea. And an old man (who may be the main bad guy) slips something in her drink, which poisons her.

Now the hero is out trying to find the magic mushroom (lol) to save her. On his quest to save her he got attacked by magic mushrooms (the hallucination kind)

And then bitten by a zombie.

Anyone else confused yet?

11-10-2009, 09:50 PM	#242
jaxx6166 Wizard Posts: 1,222 Karma: 769316 Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Eternal summer Device: 350, iPad, PW	Doug, we're going to play on the seesaw today. Real life caught up with me. Probably going to slow me down significantly. My word count stands as is. I hope to get at least 2k by the end of the night though. I'm just now starting and allowing myself 2 hours after fooling around all day. I hit a conundrum last night though. It seems the antagonist as a character is almost non-existant. He made a brief cameo in Chapter 2 as the leader of a village. The bad guy then essentially knighted him and sent him on a quest with cursed armor. The cursed armor made him go crazy and attack a bunch of civilians who were linked to the City. So then he got captured by their police force. And then he was brought before the Queen to hear his fate. While he was talking to the queen, fishmen attacked her. She was stabbed, but recovered. Then the Queen thinks the good guy is a good guy, so they sit for tea. And an old man (who may be the main bad guy) slips something in her drink, which poisons her. Now the hero is out trying to find the magic mushroom (lol) to save her. On his quest to save her he got attacked by magic mushrooms (the hallucination kind) And then bitten by a zombie. Anyone else confused yet? Last edited by jaxx6166; 11-10-2009 at 09:55 PM.