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10,126 and I think I finally made the bad guy bad. Its a little subtle. But I'm enjoying it. So far this is the bleakest, darkest thing I've ever written. I should continue tonight, it's early. But, I don't know if I'm quite ready for what comes next.
I feel bad for my hero. He's almost scitzophrenic, but it's not his fault. People keep messing with his head. It sucks to be the outsider. I'm at a point right now where I don't know who's good and who's evil. Hopefully the next chapter will shed some light on that.
My favorite sentence so far: "The ruins whispered away into tiny fragments of civilization, concrete blocks fell upwards and reaffirmed their place in the world."
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