I just finished the 110 pages of your book,
The Phoenix Rising.
I have to admit, I fully planned to keep a notebook open to track needed edits, etc, but found myself caught up in the story, and ..... well, forgot to record any.
The one thing that did make me pause was a blank page or two in the lrf format, but I quickly moved on to get to the story.
I am very interested in the continuation and fleshing out of this story. Have you completed it yet?
And, hey, I was left hanging with the return phone call.
****I like how there seems to be a deeper connection between Sam, his family, The Right to Know, and what is happening. So far, having the background of Sam's family adds information for the story.
Constance is an interesting character I would like to know more about.***