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Old 09-02-2009, 11:49 AM   #44
Steven Lyle Jordan
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I've almost finished Verdant Skies as an ePub on my ECO reader, and have noticed some things which may be typos or may be problems with my reader.
Thanks for the feedback, Alex. In order:

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- When one opens Chapter 2 the heading is President?s Arrival. On websites the ? usually indicates that a character is present which is not recognised, so I would like to know whether this character is in the original text and whether it is replaced by ? in other ePub readers.
I have seen that before: It is a reaction to MS Word apostrophes, which are not recognized as standard apostrophes by many non-word apps (same thing with MS quotes). I thought I'd caught those, so I have to look into what reverted them.

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- Throughout the book on my ECO reader CEO is shown as Ceo, COO as Coo, and EO as Eo.
That is correct, sir!. In the future, the acronyms CEO, COO and EO are simply used as word-titles, like Captain, and pronounced "See-oh," "Coo" and "EE-oh." That's exactly how I wrote them. (Isn't the future cool?)

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- The phrase 'course heavy beard' occurs where the context calls for 'coarse heavy beard'


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- The phrase 'He's tough' occurs where the context calls for 'She's tough' - the conversation is about Calvin's wife.


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- A piece of luggage is described as 'autonomic', which I'm more used to seeing when discussing physiology. 'Autonomous' doesn't really work either, since the luggage is governed by a device held by its owner.

- In one of the later chapters Julian's part of a conversation is in italics for no obvious reason.
Actually, "autonomic" is passably acceptable, if unique for the situation... it can refer to non-biologic systems. For the other comment, I need more specifics (feel free to message or e-mail me directly).

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I hope this helps, and I particularly like to know whether President?s Arrival is seen with other ePub readers.

Regards, Alex
Anyone who's bought Verdant Skies in ePub, please feel free to speak up here. Let me know if the book is displaying differently on your reader.
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