Short Story Feedback Requested
Hello,
I'm posting a short SF story I wrote sometime back and would like to get some honest feedback on it. I've recently updated it, but I would like to get a reality check on it and the writing. It's nothing heavy, so please don't expect anything "hard". It's approximately 10k words in length.
I've posted it in several formats that I converted using Calibre to hopefully make things convenient.
Thanks in advance!
Last edited by danwdoo; 10-15-2009 at 09:58 PM.
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