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Old 09-01-2009, 09:30 PM   #1
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Short Story Feedback Requested

Hello,
I'm posting a short SF story I wrote sometime back and would like to get some honest feedback on it. I've recently updated it, but I would like to get a reality check on it and the writing. It's nothing heavy, so please don't expect anything "hard". It's approximately 10k words in length.

I've posted it in several formats that I converted using Calibre to hopefully make things convenient.

Thanks in advance!

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