Thanks for making this available to the members here on MobileRead!
I know you want some feedback and constructive criticism, so I'll try to get to it soon although I'm currently reading two other novels at this time. (When I was working on my Ph.D. in English Literature [not completed], I also taught writing to first year students, so I do have a little bit of training in this area.)
I look forward to reading your work.
Thanks,
Don