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Originally Posted by emellaich
Robertb,
If I could offer some marketing feedback. And if it doesn't bother you, it is fine. It's just something I noticed. You have eight pictures, which I will number like this:
1 2 3 4
5 6 7 8
I find pictures 1,2, and 7 a bit distracting. The problem is that you have displayed a page that has hard page breaks in the lines. As a result, the lines wrap around, and then break about 2/3's of the way around each second line and you have very choppy lines. I prefer picture 8 where the text flows seamlessly. However, in the ideal world if I was restaging this I would probably want a sample page that was had a one or two paragraphs.
Look at the typical Kindle 2 picture and you will see it has a header line, a large block of text, and a new paragraph near the bottom.
If you have a photoshop guru you don't have to retake the px, just replace the screen with a new screen shot. Even if you just made this replacement in the first pic, the full on screen one, it might be helpful.
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Dear emellaich:
Your comments and opinions are always learned and I welcome help. I will also forward this entire post to our graphics person and see if we can improve.
Kindle has SO many professionals on the payroll to do almost anything. I envy that capability. They are a good role model from that standpoint!
We will learn! Thank you for some good and helpful feedback!