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Old 08-18-2009, 08:53 PM   #3234
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Originally Posted by Robertb View Post
Dear All:

I promised I would post additional pictures of the Pocket PRO showing: the device in the open case, the scroll wheel, one of the indents that holds the unit to the case, the SD card slot and USB port, the battery door with screw and the tiny external speaker, and the unit displaying horizontally.
Robertb,

If I could offer some marketing feedback. And if it doesn't bother you, it is fine. It's just something I noticed. You have eight pictures, which I will number like this:
1 2 3 4
5 6 7 8

I find pictures 1,2, and 7 a bit distracting. The problem is that you have displayed a page that has hard page breaks in the lines. As a result, the lines wrap around, and then break about 2/3's of the way around each second line and you have very choppy lines. I prefer picture 8 where the text flows seamlessly. However, in the ideal world if I was restaging this I would probably want a sample page that was had a one or two paragraphs.

Look at the typical Kindle 2 picture and you will see it has a header line, a large block of text, and a new paragraph near the bottom.

If you have a photoshop guru you don't have to retake the px, just replace the screen with a new screen shot. Even if you just made this replacement in the first pic, the full on screen one, it might be helpful.
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