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Old 08-16-2009, 10:24 PM   #27
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Good Lord, Nomesque, do you kiss your mother with that mouth?

...I thought the story was very good. Short, sharp, to the point. Decent, human-feeling characters (although Geordie fell a little flat for me) and good emotional interplay. Didn't quite see the resolution coming. Also, I really like any story that uses multiple first person perspectives. Oh, and the double-take with the plants was hilarious.

Overall, very entertaining. Well done.
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