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Originally Posted by Moe The Cat
I'm half-way through and noticed two things: - For most of the story, there are no paragraph breaks (maybe <br> tags instead of <p> tags? Or just a bad Feedbooks conversion?)
- "Donny Marco" starts out as "Donny Franco".
I like the plucky canine Steinbeck and I spotted another Joni reference in the "Mermaid Cafe". Good story so far. Thanks! |
Fixed the Marco / Franco confusion
I pasted directly in from OpenOffice, it seemed okay on my reader earlier. Let me do a check on it
EDIT: You're right, it's all kinds of borked
I'm taking it offline while I try to figure out what's gone wrong