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Old 08-13-2009, 05:55 PM   #10
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Okay it appears that the present tense more annoying to the reader than i thought it would be,

I'll drop it

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I spent 10 minutes writing this post trying to explain why I thought it was a good idea, but theN deleted it as I figured I wouldn't get that chance unless the readr happened to be a member of mr
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