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Old 08-12-2009, 11:44 PM   #41
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Originally Posted by Kess View Post
I like that! Especially the second line. Not sure I want to over-emphasise the zombie aspect, as it took four months of the blog to get to them.

What about:

Acid rain. Hungry dead. Handful of survivors.
End of the world. Start of the blog.


?

~Kess / Mel

Use the rule of 3, it's punchier.

End of the world. Handful of survivors. Start the blog.

or

End of the world? Only a handful of survivors? What better time to start a blog?
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