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Old 08-12-2009, 11:56 AM   #451
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Dont really have any idea as to what the structure of my poetry is, more just rambles, but heres a couple of old ones (you can read the rest of my cr*p on the site) - which btw needs updating with new stuff, but im really very lazy and typing out from my notebooks is not my idea of fun!

Lost Siblings

Her eyes stare blankly at nothing at all.
Her smile never fades not even in death.
Not another beat of the heart, not one more breath.
Such a lonely place, life, after a death.

Her eyes stare blankly at nothing at all
Pictures of lost siblings hang on the wall.

Pain and Regret

From the wind that rustles the trees
From the wind that stirs the leaves,
I hear the word in its silent whisper
It taunts me with its unheard voice.

In the rush of the tides wave
In the rush, one word it gave,
Not the same but something worse.

With the thunder that rolls up high
With the thunder, it came from the sky
Both words this time.

And with the rain,
The feelings met
The terrible pain
And the regret.

Darkest Night

The darkest night of my life
Is growing ever near.
I thought maybe I should play it safe
So I hid away in fear.

Now I see the morning light
But in my place I stay
Because the darkest night of my life
was not yesterday.

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lots of stuff to read in this thread, perhaps a poetry ebook would be good
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