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Old 08-09-2009, 12:24 PM   #17
Reyben
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Moejoe, that's spectacular. The only thing I'd change would be the tagline, because the story isn't so much about Ben Franklin as the Concept of Benjamin Franklin (this makes sense, I promise).

But don't change anything yet. Possibly after you've read it, whenever you have time, you might want to alter it- but I think that one's pretty good the way it is. Send me the .psd if you can. I might just come straight to you with cover requests in the future- I've seen you're cover of Dead(ish) as well and you're clearly pretty good at them.


Also, who is this "JSW" you all seem to fear?
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