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Originally Posted by Penforhire
the prose was mediocre, even a bit stilted. I felt the text drew attention to itself, did not disappear as a medium.
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I thought the prose style was intentional and I thought it worked. I think a prose style that draws attention to itself can enhance the work but I have friends that do not like it at all when the text do not disappear so I understand your point of view.