Thread: I Burn Today - by PJ Lyon (short) FEEDBOOKS
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Old 06-17-2009, 03:37 AM   #12
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Originally Posted by Moe The Cat View Post
Moejoe, there are several places where the opening quotation mark has a following space before the first word. For example, the first sentence states:



There's an extra space between the opening quotation mark and the "Y".

There are also extra spaces in front of a few commas and periods. For example, in the paragraph beginning “ The offending texts in question are ...

Also, I may have missed something, but why is the entire store included twice? I tried to compare the two stories, to see if there were any differences, but I can't find any. Is that just a typo? Is the second iteration the story written by Alfred J. Kurtz?

All that being said, I like the story very much. Thanks!
That's very very odd... I never noticed that when I uploaded and checked the file....? I'm checking now so I'll let you know what's happening

EDIT: Argghhh you're right!! It's a friggin mess. How the hell did that happen? The text is duplicated and spaces have been inserted before most of the punctuation.
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