@ sirbruce and Jack
Thank you so very much! I have a bit more confidence than on friday on tackling this monster.
@ Jack
i TRIED SO HARD to keep my sentences as simple as possible since I am as self proclaimed coma addict. but some of them just sounded so weird! I just my need to change sentecne structure.
e.j.
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Once the individual’s basic needs, nutrition and shelter, are compromised; the individual will choose to adhere to the new changes in order to ensure its welfare.
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The individual will choose to adhere to the new changes when its basic needs, nutrition and shelter, are compromised.
:thanx:
@sirbruce
the issue of my monotonoal style of writing is one i am aware of. I keep using it because it is what I am most comfortable with since I seem to think in that manner. Is there a way to change this? new brain?
thank you I am printing this thread out and making notes on what and how to tackle tonight. thank you so much.