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Old 06-06-2009, 11:38 PM   #34
Alphapheemail
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This took me about 90 minutes to complete, from outline to editing. I have to work on that since I only have 45 minutes.

I did my best to apply all of the tips from all members and the books i obtained.

I would highly appreciate if you could tell me what I have done particularly well as well as the things I didn't since I might not be realizing that I am doing XYZ right. This way I can concentrate on my weakness.

I am already extremely grateful to all members that have taken the time out of their day to help me.

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