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Old 05-30-2009, 06:13 AM   #45
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It's about the umbrella
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Originally Posted by griffonwing View Post
Very nice I love puns and other plays on words.
SNIP
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Cough, ee by 'eck tha beat me to it ..... yours be better than my draft....
Thank you all (givesalittlebow).. I'll just sit back and follow the masters ....

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Sexy, curvy, and sleek,
with a golden atomizer.
A scent, a touch, a peek,
a misty fantasizer.
Come into my bedroom,
whispers bottled French perfume.
Very Evocative...

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You saucy minx you,
I'll take my hour, and my evil grin.
Just you wait, you,
'til I'm back ag'in.
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Sunshine colours do fade away
as night surely follows each day.
Warming shadows paint the night
as cool blue light takes o’er our sight.
SNIP....

What a way with words you have.

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SNIP...

I pop a cork of my dear bottled grog.
And feel it start to burn.
I swallow more, mouth gaping as a frog.
The sky begins to turn.
Too much rum can make you sick.
That what me mum has told me *hic*

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SNIP ...

Twenty years later,
I still think about
how damn beautiful she was,
and what a coward
I used to be.
Ah, High School memories

It's fun to read the differing styles and use of words you all show. Carry on....
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