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Originally Posted by bertold
You'd have to go back a loooong way to find an author of whom you can't say the same.
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Well, yes. But the trick is to fool the readers so they do not notice and a lot of friends commented that they had noticed it in a bad way for
Hyperion and
Fall of Hyperion. And I think
Illium suffers from it also.
What I mena with noticing it is that you gate the feeling that the book is constructed and you see the seams.