Thread: Poet Challenge! New Poems Only!
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Old 05-28-2009, 05:26 PM   #6
griffonwing
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I like your choices of wording. 3 colourful adverbs, mirrored by 3 nouns.
I like the images that it brings to mind. Very sultry, almost decadent.

I, myself, do not wear or have any cologne. I normally wear one of 2 essence oils. Either Dragon's Blood or Frankincense.

Love the poem!
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