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Old 05-15-2009, 10:37 AM   #1917
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I'm reading Robin Hobb's Assassin's Apprentice right now...

It's a good read so far, but I have to wonder how she managed to find an editor who let it be published "as is". She violates several "rules":

1. The first few chapters have very little action; it's mostly a lot of dressed-up infodump and character information with little to grab the reader.

2. Every sentence is decorated with adjectives and adverbs, almost to excess. Now I don't *personally* think she goes too far, but I can easily see a lot of editors being turned off by this. It's a frequently-cited complaint.

3. The novel is written in first-person POV, but at one point she breaks that by presenting information that would be outside the character's knowledge at the time. It's not really a problem; it fits with the story and the whole tale is being told after-the-fact anyway, but again I'm surprised an editor didn't jump all of this as being "technically" wrong.
I enjoyed it. And personally am sick of all of these cookie-cutter books out there. They are completely forgettable. So it's refreshing to run into one that is different.

One thing I like but which is usually a no-no, is that Hobbs kept adding characters willy-nilly throughout the story. It's fun to suspend the critic and just enjoy a book for a change.
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