Thread: MobileRead Discussion: Neptune Crossing by Jeffrey A. Carver (SPOILERS)
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Old 04-27-2009, 08:18 AM   #10
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Device: Kindle PW, Nexus 7 (2013), Galaxy S5 phone, Galaxy Tab 4 8.0
The story was decent, but the typography drove me crazy. I had to stop; I kept getting literary whiplash. Note to authors: Large numbers of backslashes do not aid immersive reading.

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