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Originally Posted by Quoth
Also on some newer titles (OCR unlikely) having actions by another character in the middle of same paragraph as the dialogue is very bad writing. It's just confusing.
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Do you mean something like the following, where John is not the speaker:
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“Where are we going?” John just shrugged. “I need to know where to turn.”
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If so, agreed. I hate that.