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Old 01-18-2024, 09:37 AM   #2778
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Originally Posted by Dr. Drib View Post

"There was a brightness to him that made her eyes ache."
Isn't that why they make sunglasses, so when you meet someone you're attracted to your eyeballs don't get burned? These are important aspects to consider in a horror novel.
Sounds like the author needs to learn from Corey Hart

Corey Hart: vampire hunter!
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