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Originally Posted by ZodWallop
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"There was a brightness to him that made her eyes ache." Isn't that why they make sunglasses, so when you meet someone you're attracted to your eyeballs don't get burned?
These are important aspects to consider in a horror novel.
Here, try some of
MY writing that I just now made up:
He reached over and popped her eyeball out like popping a pimple. Then, being an accomplished juggler, he did what jugglers do best.
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