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Old 10-16-2023, 04:17 PM   #14
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Originally Posted by rkomar View Post
I thought I was pretty good at English grammar, but I don't see anything egregiously wrong in the quoted text. What is the problem with it?
Shouldn't it read:
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Even to the southwest, where we have the fewest aerostats, she would have been pinged for at least a few minutes.
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