Thread: Bad writing or is MY brain scrambled?
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Old 09-14-2023, 08:05 AM   #31
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Originally Posted by fathead View Post
If rcentros needs a dose of present tense narrative done well, Damon Runyon is a must - funny and clever.
The problem was caused by a dose of "present tense" in scripts. Feeding more of it might help scriptwriting, but would be contra-indicated for grey matter used to read novels.
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