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theducks · 09-09-2023, 12:14 PM

Present tense is like a Sportscaster calling the play-by-Play of a game IN PROGRESS.

Past tense is a Reporter / witness.

One of my peeves with some Gamelit authors is the feeling that the story is driving/steering the characters around the story.

09-09-2023, 12:14 PM	#24
theducks Well trained by Cats Posts: 31,250 Karma: 61360164 Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The Central Coast of California Device: Kobo Libra2,Kobo Aura2v1, K4NT(Fixed: New Bat.), Galaxy Tab A	Present tense is like a Sportscaster calling the play-by-Play of a game IN PROGRESS. Past tense is a Reporter / witness. One of my peeves with some Gamelit authors is the feeling that the story is driving/steering the characters around the story.