Thread: Bad writing or is MY brain scrambled?
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Old 09-09-2023, 12:14 PM   #24
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Present tense is like a Sportscaster calling the play-by-Play of a game IN PROGRESS.

Past tense is a Reporter / witness.

One of my peeves with some Gamelit authors is the feeling that the story is driving/steering the characters around the story.
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