Thread: Bad writing or is MY brain scrambled?
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Old 09-04-2023, 06:42 AM   #2
John F
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To me, the past tense looks normal, and what I would expect. Your present tense to me reads more like a play or direction.

I believe past tense is the norm? The book I'm currently reading uses past tense.
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