i read it last night ; i loved it too ! i particularly like the idea that a city is interesting for the people who live there, more than for the monuments ! i completely agree. i'm looking forward to reading more of your stories !! i think you should put them back on feedbooks just long enough for me to download them...
not to be a critic, but i think i found a typo : "she smiled and it was as if Venus had turned after
at thousand years to greet him."