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Originally Posted by dreams
Just had to sneak in and have a peek .. but alas caught on the laptop and have to go out and do my fair share of work 
Is this an extra word?
Jeff glanced to where he’d (been stood) only
moments before.
Move to here maybe?
(Jeff shivered.)
Her voice was a cool summer breeze and a
winter chill at the same time.
Darn, gotta get out there. Will finish reading this later...  Thanks again. |
I'll look it over in the morning. At the moment my eyes can't focus I'm that tired
Thanks for reading.