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Old 04-17-2009, 04:36 AM   #5
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It's about the umbrella
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I played with the first few sections (hope you don't mind).

Just for fun, I set it up like this...

The pounding rain of the storm almost blocked the sounds of the airships passing overhead. I looked up as they flew by and prayed I would make it home to my wife and baby daughter. The ground was already soaked and the water was flowing in tiny rivers around my feet. It was time to get on with it.

"Yes, Nero?"

“Sir, we have reports of a Greth force heading our way. They are about 3 days out.”

Poor Nero. I could hear the tremor of terror in his voice. It was hard to remember that I was once just like him. But, now was not the time to reminisce. It was my responsibility to get us all home safe.

Last edited by dreams; 04-17-2009 at 09:34 PM. Reason: change in black
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