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Old 02-25-2023, 04:15 AM   #13
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I looked at his example again.

In "Atomic Habits: Tiny Changes, Remarkable Results: An Easy & Proven Way to Build Good Habits & Break Bad Ones" I would replace the first colon with an emdash, as I think it belongs even more to the title.

This way you can avoid several colons, which in my eyes are also not nice
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