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Originally Posted by Sirtel
The book's not actually long-winded, compared to some other books I've read.
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I've simply become an increasing believer in "if the sentence doesn't need it, kill it."
Now, that doesn't mean that everybody has to be Ernie, right? But...and I think, I confess, this is likely a vestigial, knee-jerk reaction, from reading all the Indy stuff I do (in the office, how can I not?), that just goes
on and on and on and on and on.
I think I told one of my Crew the other day that one more Info Dump might put me into an
Info-Dump-atetic Coma.
sigh.
Hitch