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Originally Posted by DiapDealer
Sentences like this (especially in traditionally published books by fair to middlin' publishing houses).
"The sound of gunfire lit the afternoon sky as they prepared to leave."
I put the book down after reading it. Still not fixed in any new ebook editions after 10+ years.
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No matter how I twist my brain around, I can't get that sentence to make any sense. Did they cheap out on the editing?