Sentences like this (especially in traditionally published books by fair to middlin' publishing houses).
"The sound of gunfire lit the afternoon sky as they prepared to leave."
I put the book down after coming across it. Still not fixed/changed in any new ebook editions after 10+ years.
Perhaps the author is a synesthete, but I doubt it.
Last edited by DiapDealer; 08-03-2022 at 12:44 PM.
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