Thread: On the verge of abandoning a book... for the first time in my life
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Old 12-21-2021, 12:58 PM   #8
j.p.s
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The story is basically at a stand-still with an enormous info-dump going on.
I like a good story, but don't require a story be present at all. I also love info dumps.

But turgid prose is turgid prose.
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