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Finally finished Sufficiently Advanced Magic by Andrew Rowe.
While the overall story was creative the execution was terrible. Typos, word repetition, poorly constructed sentences, weak dialogue, vague or missing descriptions, condescending pandering and illogical stuff throughout. This needed major major editing- plot editing, line editing and proofreading. I knew this was written like a RPG but does that mean it has to be done poorly? Rated D- [one star].
Next, a breather, Howl's Moving Castle by Diana Wynne Jones. Picked up through Prime Reading.
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