Thread: The Phoenix Rising V2.xx
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Old 03-29-2009, 06:45 AM   #6
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Sorry for the late reply, Jaxx, only just got around to putting your excerpt on my Reader. I'm reading now, and so far loving the story, nothing's jumping out at me flow wise, but I'll give you a more in-depth review later on.
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