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Old 12-29-2020, 08:50 PM   #30
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so im reading light novels that are quite long (1000 chapters+). They consist of about 50% dialogue 50% narration and thought. Sometimes there are unnecessary narrations(repeated explanations) while the dialogue is always important.
Sounds like poor writing to me.
Sounds like a compilation of a serialised story.

If published as a single volume, should have all the recaps edited out.
That would be a better enhancement than bolding speech.
Might ask the writer(s) if they want that, it might make a saleable book out of it.

I think Twilight started as online fanfic...
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