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Originally Posted by Bookworm_Girl
[...] Mostly I could not get past the writing. Just better writing would have made a big difference to me. Sometime it was just too immature, like the Macy's Parade pooper-scooper reference, or sometimes just plain bad (the Arch looks like a shopping bag handle???). [...]
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I just remembered that I meant to look up a picture of the Gateway Arch, and now that I have the description works for me - see attached.
Of course it may depend on what sort of bags you go shopping with. Wikipedia had an image of Queen Elizabeth II with a handbag that matched pretty well too, but would have taken me too long to edit in the Arch.
(P.S. I agree that the pooper-scooper reference was a pretty ham-fisted attempt at injecting humour.)