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Originally Posted by Bookworm_Girl
Mostly I could not get past the writing. Just better writing would have made a big difference to me. Sometime it was just too immature, like the Macy's Parade pooper-scooper reference, or sometimes just plain bad (the Arch looks like a shopping bag handle???).
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Yes, better writing would have pushed this into one I was at least willing to read. For all the hype, this was way below acceptable.